2019年、鹽城一模英語作文詳解！本篇作文應該怎么寫？

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　　概括：

　　本文屬于現象——反應類議論文，此類概括文分為兩個部分：現象是什么?反應是什么?

　　現象：體育課很重要但被忽略(至于如何重要，如何被忽略，都不要寫了)

　　Sports classes are ignored though are very important.

　　進一步濃縮：

　　Despite sports classes’ great importance, they were heavily ignored in middle schools.

　　(Despite…, …這是通用的概括現象類句式)

　　反映：圖表的詞是：不滿(只能看主要的數據表現，這不是描述圖表，所以要反應趨勢)，政府是采取措施，不用說措施的主要內容了。

　　More than 60% of students surveyed expressed dissatisfaction with the sports classes. In response, the government has taken measures to solve it.

　　和上文合并濃縮：

　　Despite sports classes’ great importance, they were heavily ignored in middle schools, with which more than 60% of students surveyed expressed dissatisfaction. In response, the government has taken measures to solve it. (32個詞)

　　要點一：

　　原因可以從內因和外因考慮：

　　1.應試教育，所以學習壓力大 –》舉例：作業多(結果)犧牲體育課

　　2.體育設施不好

　　It is the exam-oriented system that is to blame for the problem. Heavy academic pressure burdens students with endless homework, forcing them to sacrifice sports classes. Also, the poorly-equipped sporting facilities make it hard for students to like PE class. This is the reason why the sports class is losing its appeal.

　　要點二：

　　措施：這種公共性的現象一般都是從三個角度寫，我第一時間隨意寫了這些點，算是大腦風暴吧，然后從中找邏輯關系，進行取舍。

　　2. 政府：a factor for enrollment, encourage schools to put …in the first place

　　個人：strengthen their health, make the most of, build teamwork spirit

　　學校：instead of …, give high priority to, enough time should be allocated to…, facilities

　　總結：In fact, sports classes contribute to academic improvement, feel energetic and motivated

　　較終成文：

　　The following tips, if adopted, will surely work. First, along with the government’s measures, schools should invest in sports facilities and PE teachers’ training. Only when PE is given due attention to, can students embrace it free of worries. Besides, students need to promote the awareness that sports classes will not backfire on them, but rather refresh them in study.

　　Undoubtedly, with the combined efforts, the sports class can inspire students’ passion and serve its purpose.

　　backfire (have opposite effect) «plan, scheme» 事與愿違

　　backfire on [somebody]　對某人產生適得其反的效果

　　完整的段落：

　　Despite sports classes’ importance, they were heavily ignored in middle schools, with which more than 60% of students surveyed expressed dissatisfaction. In response, the government has taken measures to solve it. (31個詞)

　　It is the exam-oriented system that is to blame for the problem. Heavy academic pressure burdens students with endless homework, forcing them to sacrifice sports classes. Also, the poorly-equipped sporting facilities make it hard for students to like PE class. This is the reason why the sports class is losing its appeal.

　　The following tips, if adopted, will surely work. First, along with the government’s measures, schools should invest in sports facilities and PE teachers’ training. Only when PE is given due attention to, can students embrace it free of worries. Besides, students need to promote the awareness that sports classes will not backfire on them, but rather refresh them in study.

　　Undoubtedly, with the combined efforts, the sports class can inspire students’ passion and serve its purpose. (125個詞)

　　詞塊：

　　in reponse作為反應

　　exam-oriented system應試制度

　　burden ... with...給……施加負擔

　　be to blame for...是……的原因

　　lost its appeal失去吸引力

　　invest in投入

　　give due attention to對……足夠的重視

　　embrace接受

　　be free of worries沒有擔憂

　　promote the awareness增強意識

　　backfire on sb對……不利

　　not...but rather...不是……而是相反，……

　　refreshsb使人精神抖擻

　　inspire one's passion激發熱情

　　serve one's purpose達到目的